Back to a post focussed on writing! For the last few weeks, this blog has meandered around a bit, probably because I’m in the midst of my own version of writer’s block. Hard to advise aspiring authors on how to write when you’re sort of stuck yourself.
I’m about two hundred pages into the third book in the Inspector Ramirez series.
At this stage, I can see the difficulties in writing a series successfully. How much information do you give out about the characters? About their backstory? About previous plots?
A third book will still be the first to many readers. I think if you repeat too much information from earlier stories, you run the risk of boring your return readers. Or of giving away too much of the twists and turns in the earlier books to the new ones.
The first two books proceed sequentially, over a two week period. With this one, which takes a place later in the year, I find myself trying to imagine what happened over that interval and how much of it requires explanation.
(Many authors, of course, have their books set a year or two apart. But I like the political uncertainty of Cuba over the late 2006 to mid-2007 period, with Castro in hospital and his brother ‘temporarily’ leading the government, and I wanted to stay there for a while. Besides, I’d find it hard to leave that long a gap in my characters’ lives.)
In a series, of necessity, some of the same facts have to be disclosed about the characters. There has to be a way to make that stuff fresh each time, but I haven’t figured it out yet.
The plot is relatively straightforward. I know my twists and turns, who did it. This time, my struggle is with the characters: trying to find ways for them to evolve and deepen in their interactions with each other.
And finally, because I have events unfolding in two countries, I’m trying to figure out at what point to connect the two threads. That one stumps me. I don’t want it to happen too soon, or leave it too late. I haven’t decided which country’s characters will solve the murder, Cuba’s, or Canada’s. Or in which country my killer will be when that happens, or how to keep the tension high.
Normally, I try to write at least a chapter or two a day. In a good weekend, when things are cooking, I can write several thousand words. (Managed to kick out 16,000 in one weekend last summer … I can tell you, my keyboard was smokin.’) But these days, I’m getting a few paragraphs written daily and that’s mostly filler.
It gives me a whole new appreciation for authors like Ian Rankin, who have managed to keep their lead protagonists going for years. (I can now also completely understand why Rankin finally closed the door on Inspector Rebus, and began a new series.)
Some authors find a series easier to write than stand-alones, because they already know their characters. But I can certainly see the appeal in making each novel self-sufficient.
Update, January 15th. Happy to say the writer’s block is gone! 5,000 words today and plot issues resolved. Yayyy!!!!